Re: Red Silk Girl

The beauty of Gor is the story tellers who pass along all the stories that did not make it to the books. So, this board is for those who love to tell stories to share them, and have quick access to them if they need to tell a new story.

Re: Red Silk Girl

Postby djinni » Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:07 am

This is my first ever story and was done as a writing assignment.

https://docs.google.com/Doc?id=df8fds39_0gjpddftw&btr=EmailImport

This girl is beginning to learn about Gor and hopes that any errors will be excused and critiqued with an eye toward improvement.
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Re: Red Silk Girl

Postby {karimah}Å«Fo§» » Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:35 pm

Greetings djinni,

a beautifully written story and very captivating.. once i started i couldn't stop reading it *smiles*.. thank you so much for sharing it here on this forum :)

wishing you well,

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thanking my Master for allowing kari to post to this forum :)
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Re: Red Silk Girl

Postby djinni » Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:44 pm

Thank you sister kari for the sweet words. This girl wrote it in one sitting. She just sat at the keyboard and the words flowed outward. She was barely cognizant of the time going by. She was just supposed to recreate a short scene about a first physical encounter between a Dom/me and a sub. She did not realize until she finished that she had spent all night writing it.

This girl hopes to continue writings stories as her experience grows. Thank you and your Master for allowing this girl a means to display her efforts.
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Re: Red Silk Girl

Postby Thandar » Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:40 pm

Tal Free and slaves,
I pray you all are well.

Looks to the girl djinni. Well done girl. Not only have you over come a stereotype in grand fashion, but you've displayed the heart and soul of a kajira. Always be who you are, and never believe if any tell you otherwise. You know who you are and on Gor or on Earth this is summed up as Strength: To never waver in your beliefs, Courage: To be who you are, Honesty: To be truthful with yourself and others, no matter the outcome. Honor: To show honor in your service to owner and or Home.

Well done girl. I hope to hear more of your journey in the future.

I wish you all well,
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Re: Red Silk Girl

Postby djinni » Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:04 pm

This girl thanks You Thandar Sir, and she hopes to post additions soon. It is gratifying to her that O/others may see value in her endeavors.

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Re: Red Silk Girl

Postby Yahto~GP~ » Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:03 pm

Greetings djinni ,

With much pleasure I read the story . Well done ! I also wish you all the best with the journey you are making now into this wonderful world called Gor.

I wish you well ,

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